Ordering Words in a Sentence

The third of four children, I had been preceded to a neighborhood Roman Catholic school by an older brother and sister. 

I, the third of four children, had been preceded to a neighborhood Roman Catholic school by an older brother and sister.

An older brother and sister had preceded me, the third of four children, to a neighborhood Roman Catholic school.

An older brother and sister had preceded to a neighborhood Roman Catholic school before I, the third of four children.

A neighborhood Roman Catholic school where I, the third of four children, had been preceded by an older brother and sister. 

A neighborhood Roman Catholic school had been preceded to by an older brother and sister before I, the third of four children.


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